2007년 09월 19일
noname
After writing my college essay, I realized that I generally tend to write too long.
The first draft of my essay was about two and a half pages long.
Ms.Sosason recommended me to abridge the entire essay into at least less than 2 pages.
But it would be a quite tough work for me.
I'm not the one who babbles out whatever comes up to my mind. I can't understand why my writings are so verbose and even superfluous.
Probably I write what I have been putting up with in my mind for a long time. Maybe that's why I'm talkative when I write something.
By the way, I got a phone call from my middle school teacher today.
We didn't talk for a long time, but it was a great pleasure to hear his voice again.
At the last moment, he wished me good luck and advised me never to go against people's trust in me.
Though it was short, his last word kind of awoke me who was totally unconcerned with others' belief and expectation on me.
Yes, I should never be contrary to the expectations of people who firmly believe in me.
I don't mean I must comply with their unreasonable wishes; going to Harvard, getting 2400 in SAT, or ranking the top in my school is truly impossible.
But I just want to prove that I at least did my best, tried all the possible methods and paved the best way I can further go on.
I want show them I have nothing to regret upon my decision and I'm quite satisfied with what I have achieved so far.
So, that's all.
The first draft of my essay was about two and a half pages long.
Ms.Sosason recommended me to abridge the entire essay into at least less than 2 pages.
But it would be a quite tough work for me.
I'm not the one who babbles out whatever comes up to my mind. I can't understand why my writings are so verbose and even superfluous.
Probably I write what I have been putting up with in my mind for a long time. Maybe that's why I'm talkative when I write something.
By the way, I got a phone call from my middle school teacher today.
We didn't talk for a long time, but it was a great pleasure to hear his voice again.
At the last moment, he wished me good luck and advised me never to go against people's trust in me.
Though it was short, his last word kind of awoke me who was totally unconcerned with others' belief and expectation on me.
Yes, I should never be contrary to the expectations of people who firmly believe in me.
I don't mean I must comply with their unreasonable wishes; going to Harvard, getting 2400 in SAT, or ranking the top in my school is truly impossible.
But I just want to prove that I at least did my best, tried all the possible methods and paved the best way I can further go on.
I want show them I have nothing to regret upon my decision and I'm quite satisfied with what I have achieved so far.
So, that's all.
# by | 2007/09/19 23:51 | hi | 트랙백 | 덧글(10)
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it's just your way, nigg.
As a roommate, it'd be so rude, isn't it? ㅋㅋㅋ
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